How to
Write Quality Headlines
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Do |
Don't |
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Read the article,
especially the opening paragraphs, to understand the purpose and main
idea.
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Give the most
general, overall focus/summary of the story.
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Remember that the
headline may be the only reason the reader decides to read the story
(Entry point.)
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Avoid headlines that
can have more than one interpretation. (See Below)
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Limit the number of
words -- 6 to 10, generally
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Use strong, active
verbs. (To be verbs are generally understood, but not written out.)
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Use present tense
verbs.
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Express a complete
thought. Headlines usually read like simple sentences.
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Substitute a comma
for the word "and."
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Mislead the reader
about the content of the article. Avoid downplay, exaggeration,
sensationalism.
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Use the name of the
school unless it's absolutely necessary.
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Use the verbs
"participate" or "experience."
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Use labels or phrases
for headlines.
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Put a period at the
end of a headline.
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Use names, unless
very well recognized. Use grades or positions instead.
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Use abbreviations or
slang.
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Use "a," "an" or
"the."
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Horrible
headlines
These are REAL headlines that appeared in daily newspapers.
America's
new war: Japanese still eyeing Hawaii
Taxpayer
role proposed in future terror acts
Editor's
wife rented to two suspects, FBI says
Students
return to ground zero high
Nightclub
liquor license denied, close-by Lansing church objects
Scientists
spot plant outside solar system
Many
businesses say English must be spoken on by workers
Animal
movements banned
Brain
drain small, but significant, study says
1.6
million Cherokees recalled